I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wednesday, April 15, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hi Mikhanya, this sounds like a tricky situation for Walter to be in. He obviously wanted his bagel...but the pigeon wanted it more! I love the way you have used punctuation for effect in your writing- well done. Do you think you could post the video so that your readers can see it and make connections to your writing.
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