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Friday, March 22, 2019

6 sentence story.

Once upon a time there was a princess called "Princess goslin." She was also a teacher to south hornby school. Princess goslin lived in a banned tower because other people think that magic is not real but it is. Princess goslin's talent is an a inventor & singing! She is also good at juggling & playing soccer! But princess goslin had a problem. Her problem was.... well she wanted to explore the open and escape the tower! But her mother is a terrible woman and does not let her go! Then one day she sneaked down her glittery hair and was escaping. But then the wicked woman came into her room and said "Rise and shine my darling!" Then she noticed that she was gone! She solved the problem by escaping while her wicked mother was in the kitchen, Making her breakfast. She went to the king and queen and said "Are you my lost parents????" "Yes!!!!!" Said her parents. Then the wicked woman said "I will be back....Muahuauauauaua! The end.
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 22, 2019 at 1:49 PM

    Hi Mikhanya,
    I am Jyoshika and i am your friend. I really like your six-sentence story that you write about Miss Goslin. You add so many details in your story. Maybe next time you can add some many details than this. Can you please learn me how you make the plan better.
    Thank you.

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  2. AnonymousMarch 22, 2019 at 1:53 PM

    I really like your comment jyosika because it is really kind of you. thank you so much! See you later!

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  3. Miss GoslinApril 28, 2019 at 5:53 PM

    Hi Mikhanya Miss Goslin here, thanks for posting your six sentence story. You are such a great writer you went above and beyond and wrote more than six sentences! I absolutely love the story. You are so creative.
    Looking forward to hearing back from you.
    Miss Goslin

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  4. AnonymousMay 2, 2019 at 11:40 AM

    I really like your sentences too miss goslin!

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