I heard Mr. Goodin crack open the packet of marshmallows.
I smelt the sweet, powdery marshmallows.
I wondered if I went to marshmallow land, 'would I see a marshmallow with a face, arms, legs and feet'?
When Mr.Goodin opened the packet of marshmallows, I smelt the sweet,powdery, yummy marshmallows.
After that, we tasted the marshmallows. We finished eating them and after that we tidied up.
The experience made me feel very happy!
By Mikhanya.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you described how the marshmallows smelt. This reminded me when I ate marshmallows and they smelt amazing. Next time you could make the size of your font bigger. Did you choose what food you wrote about or did your teacher choose
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